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Christmas Contest - All the Presence! (I mean, Presents!)


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Christmas Contest - All the Presence! (I mean, Presents!)

#1 by hanako - Dec 8 2013

It's been a while since we did a giveaway, hasn't it?

Contest: Elodie Receives A Gift!

For this competition I ask you to write a short story about Princess Elodie from Long Live The Queen getting a present of some kind. What is it, who sent it, and what does she do with it? Is it dangerous? Does she like it?

Christmas doesn't really exist in this setting but that's not important, you can use Earth-world holidays if you want. Or her birthday, or a present for no reason at all.

Entries should be between 500 and 1500 words.

If you haven't played the game yet and don't know what sort of present she might like, your other option is Elodie's New Dress - draw a picture of Elodie in some new outfit instead of her usual game clothes. As silly as you like. Spacegirl Elodie? Barbarian Warrior Elodie? Whatever.

Prizes At least one person will receive their choice of a free downloadable copy of one of my games (plus Steam key if it's one on Steam). Beyond that it depends on how many people enter! If only a handful of people take part then there will only be one winner. If we get a good selection we can give away more codes. If we get a HUGE pile of entrants then we can give out a CD version too.

Deadline: December 22nd That will allow us to announce the winner and give them their prize in time for Christmas.

To Enter - For stories you can just post them here in the thread, or you can post them on a fanfic site and post a link. Either works. We don't do image uploading on the forum, so you will need to host your image somewhere else (my suggestions would be deviantart or archiveofourown but whatever works for you) and post a link.

Winners will be posted in this thread and notified by private message, so be sure you remember to come BACK to the forum occasionally to see if you've won!

Any questions? Ask away!

phoenixgirl

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#2 by phoenixgirl - Dec 9 2013

Coolies on the contest. I'm totally in. Very Happy I'm curious as to whether the winner(s) will be picked at random or based on their entry.

Anyway, here's my contest entry:

A Sweet Treat

Dressed in my usual royal attire, I was walking down the hallway back towards my room. I had just finished taking care of some royal matters that needed my attention and was grateful that I finally had a break and some time to myself. All I wanted was to return to my room and take a much needed nap. By now, I should be used to being a queen but there are times when it feels overwhelming and much more so now that Dad returned to Caloris and I had to take on more responsibilities by myself.

Once I reached my room, I flopped down on my bed, waiting for sleep to overtake me, when I saw a small brightly colored present set on my dresser. Sitting up, I looked at it carefully, wondering where the present had come from. None of the servants had told me earlier that I would be receiving a package and remembering from past experiences where not all brightly wrapped gifts brought good tidings, I was a little skeptical to open it. However, upon closer inspection, I saw that there was a small note attached to the card which said,

A sweet treat from your one and only apple thief

Recognizing the handwriting, I smiled to myself and then called out,

“Evrard, are you here? I want to see you.”

I heard the sound of footsteps quickly approaching me from behind and before I could turn around, a pair of warm strong arms gathered around my waist. I felt a warm breath near my right ear and Evrard quietly said,

“Hey, Elodie.”

I turned around and smiling at him, I replied,

“Hey, yourself. How did you get here?”

Evrard looked at me with that cheeky grin of his and replied, “You should know by now. Take a guess.”

Looking thoughtful, I replied, “Well, if I were trying to sneak on the castle grounds without the guards noticing, I would have hidden myself in a clump of bushes and figured out when the guards would change rotation. Then I’d take that opportunity to sneak on the grounds and make sure not to get seen. Finally, I’d find my way to my bedroom window and using the nearby trees, I’d climb up carefully and then sneak in unseen.

Now tell me-how did I do?”

Evrard chuckled quietly and replied, “Very good guess. Yup, that’s what I did.”

Looking at the present, I replied, “So you came all this way to give me a present?”

Evrard grinned and replied, “That and to visit you. I did promise that I would visit you more, right? It was hard, what with all those soldiers, but I found a way.”

I smiled and replied, “I see. Well, now that you’re here, you can watch my reaction as I open this.”

I reached out to unwrap the present and once I took off the wrapping paper and bow, I saw a small-sized tin container. Then I opened the lid of the container and to my delight, I saw that it was a delicious assortment of chocolate and pecan cookies. I turned to Evrard and said,

“You’re the best, and these smell so good!”

Evrard replied, “Only the best for you, Elodie. Try one-I made them myself. Pa’s been helping me with making delicious cookies and I think I finally got them right.”

I nodded and taking a warm, chocolate chip cookie, I took a small bite. Indeed, it was the most delicious cookie I had ever tasted, even better than the ones that Evrard’s dad made. I looked at Evrard and said,

“You really made these all by yourself? They taste like heaven.”

Evrard replied, “You really like them?

I nodded enthusiastically and replied, “Of course. They’re the best cookies I’ve ever eaten.” I paused, realizing something, and then added,

“But is there a special occasion for giving me cookies? It’s not my birthday or a holiday or anything.”

Evrard chuckled and replied, “Do I really need a reason to give you cookies? But if I had to have one, I guess I could tell how stressed out you’ve been and so I thought a batch of delicious cookies would cheer you up.”

I giggled and replied, “I can’t get angry over that reason.”

I gestured for Evrard to eat the cookies with me, as there were a lot and there was no way I would be able to finish them all in one sitting. As I sat next to him, enjoying the cookies and his company, I thought about how our friendship had only grown and gotten stronger since our first meeting. I gazed happily at him, feeling a warmth and caring that I had so rarely experienced.

Evrard noticed me looking at him, for he asked,

“Is there something wrong?”

I shook my head and smiling, I replied, “Not at all. I was only thinking about how happy I am that I didn’t let the guards arrest you for stealing my apples.”

Evrard laughed and replied, “Me, too.”

Note: My story is loosely based on another LLTQ fanfic story I recently wrote but as that story doesn't meet the requirements for this contest, I thought it better to write this one. And obviously, I wrote the story assuming the Elodie and Evrard relationship. ^^
Please help and support me here.

hanako

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#3 by hanako - Dec 9 2013

Exact choosing methods also tend to vary based on how many entries there are. If possible I'll want to do a mix of random and judged results, so everyone has a chance but good work has a better one.

Bombermans

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#4 by Bombermans - Dec 9 2013

A silly question: Entries all have to be in english, right? I mean, I can't write the fanfic entry in my native language, spanish, can't I?

Yeah, really silly question, but I am already writing a fanfic (which does not meet the requirements of the contest) of Princess Elodie in spanish. If I could write an entry on spanish, my life would be fullfilled (?) XDDD I could try to write in english, but probably it would be like primary school english... Maybe I could try a translator, though... but then it may become retarded english Laughing

PS: Really really love the idea of the fanfic. I really like Long Live The Queen and Princess Elodie, so I can't wait to see all the images and read all the entries! ^^ We do not have enough fanart!!

hanako

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#5 by hanako - Dec 9 2013

Well, I can't read spanish, so it would be kind of hard to judge if not english, I'm afraid. Smile

ark99k

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#6 by ark99k - Dec 12 2013

Ahh! I am terrified to submit this! This is a short story about Christmas in Long Live the Queen. Half of the story is incorporating Christmas so it fits with the story and the second half is the actual present part. I am sorry for the awful writing skills! I just had to at least enter the contest. Smile
http://www.wattpad.com/story/10520229-elodie%27s-gift-of-chistmas

At this moment I really just hope it meets the requirements.
★Shining like a star!★

wendymarlowe

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#7 by wendymarlowe - Dec 12 2013

Mine's on the shorter end, but "A Most Useless Gift' is up at http://archiveofourown.org/works/1079734 and https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9919231/1/A-Most-Useless-Gift. (Same story, but AO3's formatting is a lot easier to read, in my opinion!)

This was my first LLTQ fanfic, but I've got some Magical Diary ones up there too :-)

LionessGrl

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#8 by LionessGrl - Dec 12 2013

I sit at my desk, my face usually stressed out from royal duties now scrunched up in fear of what was on my bed.

When I had entered my room I saw a box wrapped up in shiny red paper decorated with golden, fascinating decorations. On top of the box lay a perfectly tied up golden, bow with a tag sticking out from it. Like a child I jumped up in joy, clapped my hands and let out a squeal of delight. I love presents, and being queen I got a lot of them. Unfortunately, they were usually boring gifts fit for a 'Queen'. Yes, I may be Queen but I am a kid still and I don't fancy books on History of Nova or pens to help write out new laws. I like toys, and stories filled with adventures! This present showed promise though, all of my other presents were decorated in boring paper and didn't even have a bow half of the time. Also, this was delivered in an entirely different matter. Usually a servant would call for me and give it that way, but this had just been waiting on my bed.

I started to feel my nervous, my heart was pounding as I took slow steps towards it as though it contained a bomb ticking away. It very well could, it wouldn't be the first time someone had tried to take my life. Thoughts of poisoned chocolates filled my head, I made a mental note to not just pop it in my mouth if it happened to be some sort of dessert. My hands were shaking as I gently touched the tag and unfolded it from the bow. The handwriting was beautiful, soft swirls and straight lines formed the letters that spelled out: To my dearest Elodie, Love your mother.

It was as though the present itself wasn't the danger, but the words that were signed on the tag held the real trap. My heart stopped, my breath held and the world turned out from under my feet. I would have fallen if I hadn't taken a few steps back and grasped onto my chair. It took time but I managed to situate myself on my chair, now here I am looking wearily at the present, trying to figure out what I was going to do with it. Was this a cruel joke? Everyone in Nova knows my mother died at the hands of another lumen wielder. Togami. Was this a gift from him? I sent him back with the knowledge that he should sing to his children, but did he change his mind and decide to come after me again?

Fear clutched at me just as my hands were at my chest. I could feel my lumen pulsing in time with my heart. The urge to call out for someone to help me was pushed away. I am Queen now, I have to take control and learn to fight my own battles. But oh, that was harder than it sounded. Wetting my lips, I take a few deep breaths and stand on shaky legs. Walking felt like one of those intricate dances I learn in class, but I manage to make it back to my bed. I sit down next to the bag and carefully pick it up. I don't want to look at the tag again, just the word mother make my eyes water with years of tears.

“It's now or never.” I whisper to myself as I undo the bow and place it by my side. It felt so wrong to be scared of opening a gift, when so many children would do so with glee. As I slowly, and cautiously take the wrapping paper off I think of how I used to just tear it away with no thought of saving it. Finally, I get to the simple, brown box and use my nails to rip the tape away. Just one more move and I would see what 'mother' had given me.

I didn't want to do it. I just wanted to toss the box and it's unknown contents out the window, let the servants deal with it, crawl into bed and fall asleep. But, I couldn't do that. I have to see what this gift is, not only because my curiosity was racing but because if this was a threat on my life I needed to know now so I could take care of it. Again my body went into flight mode, but I pushed through it and opened the box. There was a lot of paper crammed in, but a single letter was on top of it. Hoping this held all my answers, I picked it up and began to read.

My dearest daughter,
My, you have grown and it both proud and saddens me to see how far you have matured. I remember you as a little girl playing with the other kids outside. You would pretend to go on quests slaying monsters and gathering treasure. Elodie, my daughter, you don't have to pretend any longer for you are Queen of Nova and those adventures await you. You have given me so much, and now it is my turn to give to you.
Inside this box a gift from your mother a long time ago waits. She had made this while pregnant with you and wished to give it to you on your 15h birthday. I wanted to give it to you then but my heart was weak and I did not wish to ruin your happy day. Now, I must gather my strength like you have and let you have this precious gift. My Elodie, remember that your mother and I are always here for you. And remember, above all else, you are strong and can do anything you set your heart to.
Love always,
Your mother and father


My tears were running down my face as I held the letter against me. Father had left this morning during my classes, he must have left this here before. We are very close even if we hardly speak due to how busy we both are with our duties. This letter though, only proves how much he loves me. I wasn't mad that he hid this gift from me, before I would be throwing a fit. But life taught me how people think, some are out for their selves but my father is different. He cares for me deeply and as his letter said, he wanted to wait for the right time.

Now is the right time. I push the paper back and reach into the box, when my fingers touch soft fur I pull my hand back and hold up a teddy bear. I look at it in joy, my eyes watery and wide. The bear was brown, made out of the softest fur I have ever felt. It's eyes were golden jewels carved and shined to reflect what it saw like real eyes. It's nose was leathery and black and in it's arms it held a red, velvet heart with letters sewn in that spelled 'Congratulations my dear Elodie.'

I sat there stunned, my mother had made this for me. Her hands had touched this bear, her fingers had spent hours sewing away to make this wonderful treasure, she had thought of me. I didn't have much from her, my father in his sadness got rid of most of it. But, this, will be my most treasured item I own. Even more treasured than my Lumen.

In a childish antic I kicked the box and wrapper off the bed. The letter was placed on my desk and the bear never left my arms. I push back the blankets, huddle down underneath, and hold the bear close to me. For the first time, in a long time, I cry. I let out all my emotions, the fear, the sadness, the anger all of it that had been bottled up in me was finally let out. The last emotion that I feel as I drift off to sleep is happiness.
Games I have: Fatal Hearts, Date Warp, Magical Diary, Long Live The Queen, Royal Trap

Franka

Re: Christmas Contest - All the Presence! (I mean, Presents!

#9 by Franka - Dec 13 2013

A TREAT FOR PUPPY

Elodie gave the parcel a tentative shake.

It was sitting on the table, waiting, tempting her to partake in its secrets. Red cloth with green ribbons surrounded a square package, a size that she figured would probably accommodate a crown.

What was in it? A servant had left it for her, after it had arrived in the morning, before she had gotten out of bed. Now it was mocking her from a low table next to the recliner she was squatting in.

“What are you?” she asked of the devilish box, but no answer was forthcoming. No card had accompanied it, and the servant who had received it had gone to town.

Remembering last year’s chocolate debacle, Elodie was understandably wary. Her eyes narrowed as conflicting emotions warred within her. Impatience and curiosity mixed with a healthy dose of caution and what might be coined ‘wisdom’ after her many near brushes with disaster.

Nothing rattled within the box, though she could feel something shifting. It was light, too light for her earlier crown theory.

Should she get a servant to open it? Or..? A fiendish idea spawned in her mind, an impish grin lighting up her face. “Better safe than sorry, is that not what they say?” she asked herself, then gave a sharp whistle.

A muffled sound of padded footsteps announced the arrival of Puppy, Elodie’s favorite hunting dog. He was a brutish thing, all muscle. Powerful jaws with a wicked set of teeth, exactly what she needed. The beast was devoted to her, she’d chosen him herself, played with him and trained him.

Giving the blasted conundrum a shove, it fell from the table, bouncing once on the carpet. Puppy’s beady eyes followed it, and he inclined his head slightly, questioning her.

Elodie gave the situation a final once over. Raising her hand, she hesitated. What if it was something precious? Something from the adoring populace? But no, she convinced herself, a note would surely have accompanied it.

Letting her hand fall, as if ordering an execution, she barked out the order. “Puppy, kill!” An instant later, the growling animal tore into the defenseless gift, bits of ribbon and torn paper flying about him, as he harried the object.

Giggling gleefully, Elodie watched the gruesome spectacle. In the fray, she couldn’t quite tell what was inside it. Something colourful and woolen looking that was now being torn to shreds.

Letting the murder of the present go on for a while longer, she clapped her hands. “Puppy, to me!” Obediently, the hunting dog let go of the frazzled remains, coming to her side. Drool mixed with bits of red cloth clung to one side of his jaws, and Elodie carefully cleaned his muzzle with a handkerchief. That was when she saw it.

Under the table, accidentally kicked there it seemed, was a thin, white envelope. Elodie swallowed. Could it be? Nervously picking it up, she unfolded the paper and pulled out a letter.

“Dearest Cousin ‘Lodie,
I spent the whole of winter knitting this sweater for you. It’s my very first successful foray into the world of producing garments, and I wanted for you to have it! I hope you’ll wear it when next I visit.
Love,
Charlotte”


Looking over the sad remains of Lottie’s hand crafted exclamation of devotion, Elodie bit into her curled fist. “Oh, ****!”
+2 Depressed

CthulhuLemon

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#10 by CthulhuLemon - Dec 17 2013

(I just have to add, the +2 Depressed was hilarious.)

Sparks

In the days leading up to her Diamond Jubilee, the 60th anniversary of her coronation, Queen Elodie called the Fair, called the Just received more gifts than could be counted. Notable entries included a jeweled tiara from the Duchess of Mazomba, an ornamental apple tree from a small mayoralty on the edge of Nova and an elephant. Scores of servants were pressed into the gift-sorting process, including experts on poisons and the kind of dangerous wildlife that could fit in a hatbox and a rather shy Lumen priest surreptitiously prodding packages to see if they contained any surprises of the magical variety.

Too busy to unbox gifts herself, Queen Elodie called the Wise, called the Brave, called the Grey (behind sneering noble lady's fans) received daily lists of items unwrapped. Today's list seemed to contain nothing more notable than the elephant, which was being housed in the stable and eyed by the frightened stable-boys with curry-combs ordered to prepare it for presentation to the Queen. Nothing notable, except the final item.

Elodie called for the package and it was brought in, a simple box of fragrant wood, containing a shallow bowl of pale clay, a corked bottle and a knife, each wrapped in plain cloth. Elodie dismissed the maid and held the bottle up to the light. The list had noted it was filled with spring-water, strictly not poisonous and according to the nervous gulp of a handy scullery maid, quite potable. Bowl, water and knife.

It was hedge magic, pure and simple and common. Hardly the tools of a Lumen.

But Queen Elodie, called the Graceful, called the Healer, hadn't steered Nova for so many years by ignoring the wisdom of the peasantry. She poured the water into the bowl and touched the tip of the knife to the soft pad of an aged finger. Three drops of blood disturbed the surface of the water, pale red filaments twisting unscryable shapes in the water.

Elodie leaned forward and looked deeper into the bowl. If peasant blood would tell secrets, coaxed properly, what might the blood of a Lumen Queen show?

The shapes in the water flowed, hardly pausing in one form long enough to be recognized. They were Elodie, of course, because royal blood rarely has concerns beyond itself. Elodie at fourteen, dying in a forest. Elodie climbing a hedge. Leading an armada. And with the shapes came other senses: the smell of chocolate, the sound of a lullaby, the strike of a blow to the head, rushing faster.

Elodie was paralyzed by possibility, by all the girls she saw and was by brief turns, some frightened and some cruel. Some victorious. And so many, dying. Her court philosophers had occasionally attempted to explain theories of branching choices and fate to bored courtiers, who couldn't be bothered to worry over what their other selves might be doing, and worse, might be doing better than they. Elodie herself had noted the concept as interesting but irrelevant to the guidance of Nova.

But here, so quickly here and then gone were all these possible Elodies, as bright and brief as sparks. She felt them filling her, like a sky overcome by stars. And the surface of the water was disturbed again, this time by tears. Not many. One or two composed drops, banishing these girls and women that she longed to comfort and flee. The disturbance left a bowl of pale pink water and the feel of a kiss that tasted all at once of apples and pastry and blood, and eventually nothing at all.

Queen Elodie, called the Fierce, called the Damn Picky (in the kitchen cellars when only the other under-cooks were listening), cleared her throat and pulled the bell-cord once for a maid to take the bowl, bottle and knife away. She pulled twice for a secretary to bring her the next list, the next document to look over with what was turning into a slight, if royal, squint.

Queen Elodie was a comet and a comet could not mourn its sparks.

Mad_Scientist

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#11 by Mad_Scientist - Dec 19 2013

I've only played the demo, ok if I still attempt the writing contest? I'd try for the drawing one, but, well, my drawing "skills" are horrible.

hanako

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#12 by hanako - Dec 19 2013

Sure, write what you like Smile

The Fighting Doll

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#13 by The Fighting Doll - Dec 19 2013

I haven't written anything in a long time, but I wanted to try and do something for this. Here's my entry.

A Royal Burden


'This gray sky looks so bleak, there's barely a ray of sun passing through the clouds. It's almost overwhelming... How fitting for such a day.'

"My Queen!"

Interrupted by the sudden yell, Elodie's gaze fell back from the heavens and went to her right, where her faithful maid Alice was striding towards her with her usual deference. Elodie's features, who had started to relax, instantly returned to a state of tense focus that had become far too familiar to her. 'A queen must always be there for her subjects.'

Alice eventually stopped before her and, after doing a light curtsy and catching her breath, announced the news.

"My Queen, I'm sorry to interrupt your walk but an important package has arrived for you. It comes from beyond the mountains of Pyrias, from a House of Arlot."

"Arlot...? The name doesn't remind me of anything. Alright, I suppose I should go look at it and then start making sure everything is ready for Father's arrival. The weather isn't so pleasant anyway..."

Elodie turned towards the entrance of the castle and went back through the gardens, along with Alice. Her athletic stance made short work of the long yards of precious flowers and shrubs, pruned in a variety of decorative shapes; even they looked a bit miserable, starting to wither with the incoming cold. She crossed the gate and took off her heavy coat; soon after she was stepping into her office and checking with a curious eye the small box on her desk, next to the usual piles of paperwork.

It wasn't very wide but rather long, about twice the size of her palm, and a note was attached to it. Elodie opened it without hesitation, her magical sense telling her that the package was completely safe. Indeed, the box contained no dubious spell but a simple handmade paper fan. Elodie took it in her hand and opened it; on the side was painted a beautiful floral motif with intertwined lilies. She stared at it, taken aback, and suddenly the flow of memories came rushing back to her head.



"Hey, what are you doing, Mom?"

"I'm painting this fan. Do you want to help me?"

"Yes!"

"Alright, take the brush. Here, hold it like this. Now you trace the curve..."

"Aagh, it's hard! My hand keeps slipping!"

"I'll help you. Look, follow the..."


"It looks so beautiful, mom. Is it for Father?"

"No, it's a present for an old friend. You don't know her, but when I was young, Sophia and I were always getting in trouble together."

"Why doesn't she come to the castle?"

"Ah, she lives very far away. I wish I could see her again, but even this present will take weeks to go there."

"We could go visit her! Traveling is fun!"

"Alas, I cannot leave my kingdom for so long. You know, I have a lot of responsabilities here."

"But that's so sad, Mom! Why can't you go visit your friend? Being a queen sucks..."

"Don't say that, Elodie. You know, a queen must always be there for her subjects; that's the duty of royalty. But I'm not alone: I have my family with me, and my cute little princess here!"

"Ha! Stop tickling! Hahaha!"

"So don't worry, I'm very happy to be the Queen and serve my kingdom, as you'll be one day. Now, let's finish this fan together, Princess?"




Struck by the cruel memories, Elodie felt dizzy and had to sit on her massive chair. Her head almost felt like it was pounding; trying to get her bearings, she put the fan back in the box and unfolded the note attached.



My gracious Queen,

On this sad day, I wanted to offer you my most heartfelt condolences. I was so terribly distraught when I learned of the demise of my dear Fidelia, and my heart ached with yours. I can only imagine the pain you suffered must have been tenfold my own. Your mother was one of my most precious friend and should you ever have any request for me, it would be my privilege to answer it.

It's been only a year since she left us, and despite the heavy burden of queendom being so suddenly befallen on you, I hear only the most lyric praise of your new reign. As a token of sincere friendship towards Nova, I give you this precious paper fan that your own mother sent to me once. May you be able to become as wonderful a queen.

Sophia Arlot




Misty-eyed, Elodie put down the letter on the table and held back a sniffle. The unexpected present brought back all the sadness she had felt this morning, visiting the grave.

'A heavy burden, indeed. Would you be proud of me if you were there, Mother? If you could...'

Shedding a single tear, Elodie took a deep breath and forcibly regained to her royal wilfulness. She took the paper fan and put it on the mantelpiece of the room. She arranged it a bit, and when she was happy with the display, heaved a small sigh.

'Alright, Mother. As you were always there for me, I'll make sure I am always be there for my kingdom. It's the least I could do, right?!'

And with a confident step and a bitter smile, she left her office to attend to her duties of the day.

Mad_Scientist

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#14 by Mad_Scientist - Dec 20 2013

Well, here's my attempt. I was hoping to capture the cute but sadistic tone of the game, but we'll see how this goes. Very Happy



Elodie plays a game

That morning, Elodie wandered throughout the castle aimlessly. Though the recent arrival of Lottie had improved her mood a little, she was still very depressed and frightened. Unsure how she should start her weekend, she at last returned to her room, intending to go back to bed and sleep till noon.

But sitting on her bed was a small package wrapped in paper.

"What's this?" she wondered aloud as she approached the package. Was it perhaps a present of some sort? The paper was plain brown and undecorated, so it didn't look much like a gift, but it had been left in her room and on her bed, so it must have been meant for her. Curious, Elodie unwrapped the package.

Inside was a box with the words "Frontier Life" written on it in large letters. A colorful illustration showed several commoners, perhaps farmers, with a young and cute girl taking center stage. In smaller letters near the bottom of the box were the words: "Play an exciting game showcasing the dangerous and exciting life of Lily, a young girl living with her family on the border of civilization! Play with yourself or with friends."

Elodie opened the box and saw a board, a lot of cards, a small book that was probably the rules, a bunch of small figures and markers, and other things she didn't even recognize. She had never seen any game like this before. Who made it, and who gave it to her? For the moment, it did not matter. Elodie was intrigued, and this game gave her an excuse to stay in her room and avoid people, so she was determined to try it out. She picked up the book and began to read the rules.

30 minutes later

"Ok, so next I draw this card. Good. I think I finally understand this all now," Elodie muttered to herself as she drew a card from one of several stacks. "So the next event is this. Let's see... the horses are spooked, I gotta stop them. Check animals... failure. Check reflex...failure. So that means the horse tramples me to death."

"Wait, what?"

Elodie stared at the card, which had a cute but horrific drawing showing Lily with her head cracked open like a melon. Elodie gasped in shock and then dropped it.

"This... this... what sort of sadistic BEAST made this game?"

Elodie stood up and paced around her room for a good 10 minutes, seriously disturbed by what she had just experienced from the game. She then sat back down and immediately went back to playing it.

"I'll do better this time!" she vowed. And she did. Lily survived the spooked horse, only to be killed by disease. She survived that, only to have her throat cut by a handsome suitor who was secretly only interested in her father's land. She survived that, only to trip when leaving her house one day and crack her head on the door-frame. She might have survived even that the next time, except Elodie made some difference choices which resulted in new event where hungry wolves devoured Lily alive. The illustration for that last death was especially vivid.

Elodie slammed the card down with a lot of force, disturbing the various pieces of the game. She then crawled underneath her covers and cried for several minutes. Just who had given this game to her? If it was Lottie, she was never going to forgive her! Elodie's weeping was interrupted by the sound of knocking on her door.

Elodie quickly jumped out of her bed, hastily wiped away her tears, and responded to the knocks. "Come in."

A servant entered and bowed before. "I'm sorry, Crown Princess, there was a mix-up, and a package was brought here by mistake. I have come to retrieve it and... oh."

The servant caught site of the torn paper and the game box, the contents of which were now scattered around the room. Elodie took another look at the paper the package had been wrapped in, and noticed some writing scrawled on the side which she hadn't seen before. "To the Royal Gamemaster, for your perusal." Elodie blushed.

"Umn... yes. I was just thinking I might give the Royal Gamemaster my own opinion on the matter," Elodie lied. She wasn't aware they even had a Royal Gamemaster. She quickly gathered all the game components and put them back in the box, too flustered to know whether that was proper or whether she should just let the servant take care of it all. The servant then took the box and left the room with another bow, saying nothing about Elodie's obvious embarrassment.

Elodie decided that perhaps it would be good to get out of her room for a bit now, so she headed towards the gardens. As she did, her mood actually started to improve some. Playing that game had given her some new perspective. As sad as her life was recently, it could be far worse. Imagine having a life like that of Lily, with everything and everyone trying to kill both you and those close to you. How horrible would that be?

Yes, her life wasn't so bad, Elodie thought. As she did, she heard a voice. It was her cousin, Lottie.

"He loves me, he loves me not..."

"Lottie, do you have a boyfriend?"

"Not really. I just like to play with flowers."

...



Hope you liked it!

ozzytizer

Re: Christmas Contest - All the Presence! (I mean, Presents!

#15 by ozzytizer - Dec 20 2013

Elodie’s Bad Present Day

A frog sat upon the ground in one of the palace’s many reception rooms. It looks bewildered, well, as bewildered as a frog can look. Lying next to the figure is a scroll covered in runes. The scroll had come from a box which had been unceremoniously dropped to the floor along with the scroll. The pieces of a small, broken, frog statuette were scattered about.

Elodie frowned as she surveyed the scene. “Why would anyone target ME with such an amateur curse? No matter.” Elodie had mastered many aspects of magic, and had averted many threats. She was able to undo the curse and the frog transformed back into her servant. She had become a more willful, more mature person in that time since her mother’s passing.

She paces the room, taking note of a small pile of bogus gifts. Thankfully none of her servants have died, though some have been injured in these incidents. Perhaps that is enough servants risked for one day. Alas, one of these packages may be important. She nods to one of the guards who immediately steps forward. “Perhaps the last few will not be a trap, but I have to know. Now...open the next one.”

The guard nods and dutifully picks up the package, moves to a safe distance from Elodie, and opens it. Inside he discovers a letter. “Should I read this aloud Princess?” he asked her. “You may, but you are not reveal anything to anyone unless I say otherwise.” She responded. He nods and begins reading. The letter appeared to be a challenge from the Earl of Io.

Elodie balled her first, her face turning a faint shade of red. “How DARE he issue a challenge against me like this. I have NOT done anything to deserve this anyway. No matter, I shall accept the challenge.” She grinned at the prospect of humiliating him, he had been such a bother. “Next package!”

The guard picked up the next package, feeling a bit more relaxed now that he hadn’t been turned into some amphibian or woodland creature. Inside this package was something quite puzzling to the guard. It was a small reptilian bird, and it and the guard stared at each other. It was then that the guard without warning, and with great rapidity, turned to stone.

Elodie struck the creature dead with a magical blast, before walking up to her new guard statue. “Grrr….I don’t know how to fix this yet!” Her anger from before was nothing compared to the wrath she was now imbued with. She marched over to the last gift remaining and hurled it across the room. She turned and stormed out of the room as it crashed into the far wall.

Part of the box's contents smeared on the wall as it slide down it after impact. The remaining servant in the room wandered over to investigate. Pulling back part of the new damaged packaging revealed what looks to have been a pie. An apple pie. The servant dared not eat it in case it had been poisoned, and just before she walked off noticed that a note had fallen out. Written on a small unusual piece of yellow paper was a simple message: From Damien.

~The End

Omnificent

Re: Christmas Contest - All the Presence! (I mean, Presents!

#16 by Omnificent - Dec 21 2013

I'm not sure if this really counts, but here it is anyways!

The Abridged Days of Christmas (LLTQ ver.)

On the first day of Christmas I gave to Elodie
Julianna’s head on a stick

On the second day of Christmas I gave to Elodie
2 peasant revolts and Julianna’s head on a stick

On the third day of Christmas I gave to Elodie
3 civil wars, 2 peasant revolts
And Julianna’s head on a stick

On the fourth day of Christmas I gave to Elodie
Genocide of kinsmen, 3 civil wars, 2 peasant revolts
And Julianna’s head on a stick

On the fifth day of Christmas I gave to Elodie
5 points in Cruelty, genocide of kinsmen, 3 civil wars, 2 peasant revolts
And Julianna’s head on a stick

On the sixth day of Christmas I gave to Elodie
6 points in Lumen, 5 points in Cruelty, genocide of kinsmen, 3 civil wars, 2 peasant revolts
And Julianna’s head on a stick

On the seventh day of Christmas I came to realize
I’d totally doomed the country!



The lyrics are perfectly singable, by the by. Also, you might ask how Elodie got six points in Lumen if Julianna got killed. The answer? Debug console!

bittersweetchocolate

Re: Christmas Contest - All the Presence! (I mean, Presents!

#17 by bittersweetchocolate - Dec 21 2013

The Scent of Misery

There was a stranger in the kennels.

Elliot was with her though, talking idly with her (or rather, at her – she wasn’t offering anything more than a noncommittal hmm every now and then, from what he was overhearing), so there was probably no need to be alarmed by her presence. Elliot was a pretty odd human, sure, what with the man’s odd obsession with cheese (not that he was complaining, as the human was generous enough to sneak him a piece of it every now and then), but he was a good guy. If he was friendly with this stranger, she couldn’t be all that bad.

And if she was, well, there were plenty of ways to deal with her…

“–and this here fellow’s Topaz! Same breed as Ruby and Sapphire you saw earlier. Those two are his sisters, actually. See the family resemblance?”

At the mention of his name, Topaz blinked. Suddenly standing before him was Elliot, wearing the usual grin that looked a bit off somehow, and the stranger, who was looking straight at him.

The stranger was… not what he expected.

For one, he hadn’t been expecting for her to smell of absolute misery.

What was wrong with her, Topaz wondered, as he stared back into the stranger’s flat, empty eyes. The last time he’d smelled a human this miserable was when…

The King had last visited.

“I do. He’s a beautiful dog.”

That was all the stranger said before she left, the smell of misery following her.

o.O.o

The stranger was back again.

They were in the middle of training and it had been after following the sixth down command that he’d noticed her.

Elliot was with her again and, from the looks of it, she was trying to command Ophelia to get up from her position on the ground and stand with very little success. Topaz was not surprised in the slightest at her failure.

Ophelia wouldn’t listen to a human smelling like the stranger. If you were to get Ophelia to listen to you, you would need to hold yourself with dignity and pride – something the stranger was greatly lacking at the moment.

“Oh, Sir Elliot’s finally here,” were the words of Frederick, the sound of the human’s footsteps inching closer each second. Topaz redirected his gaze onto the man, waiting for him to issue a new command. “The Princess too. And it looks like… Ophelia’s with them? Oh, that’s no good.” Frederick frowned. “What was Sir Elliot thinking? Ophelia’s not going to listen to her given the current state the Princess is in.”

Exactly my thoughts, Topaz said, though he knew it would sound like nothing more than a bark bark to the human’s ears. Frederick, thankfully, understood his meaning and gave a small nod. “You think so too, huh? Here, tell you what, why don’t you go over there and switch places with Ophelia? I know you’d give the Princess an easier time than her, and I’m pretty sure Ophelia would prefer training with me to ignoring the Princess’s existence so…”

I’ll do it, said Topaz, standing up from his position. Frederick gave him a smile and an “I’m counting on you” before Topaz headed off into the direction of where Elliot, Ophelia, and the stranger who was called the Princess stood.

It didn’t take him very long to reach them.

“Topaz! What’re you doing here, my boy?” questioned Elliot, the first to notice his arrival. The Princess, as Frederick had called her, stopped her weak attempts of getting Ophelia to stand and looked at him, her eyes less empty than last he’d saw them. The smell of misery wasn’t as strong as it had been either – it was still quite potent and it had lessened only slightly, but still there was a difference, however small.

He briefly wondered how long the smell would stay with her, before turning to face Ophelia. Frederick wants to train with you. I’ll handle this one, he said.

Ophelia stood up. Topaz wondered how she was able to make such a simple procedure as standing look so refined. Perhaps she’d been practicing it in secret. My thanks, Topaz, Ophelia said, before making a dignified exit towards the other dogs in training. Topaz watched her briefly before turning to face Elliot and the Princess once more.

The Princess looked terribly confused. “What just happened?” she asked, turning to Elliot.

Elliot simply shrugged, though Topaz could hear the amusement in his voice. “Looks like you’ll be training with Topaz this time. Hope you don’t mind, Princess Elodie.”

First the Princess, now Princess Elodie. How many names did this girl go by?

“Of course not. Topaz, right?” She looked at him, trying to hide the uncertainty on her face but failing miserably. Topaz watched her silently, waiting for her to issue a command. “How about… sit? Sit, Topaz?”

It came off as more of a question than a command, but he did so anyway. By the look on her face, she was surprised it had worked. She blinked furiously before hesitantly voicing out another command; as if unsure he’d listen to her.

He obeyed.

With each new command she’d issue out and he’d obey, the confidence within her voice rose and the better her posture became.

Eventually, she left the area with a small smile on her face, the smell of misery lessened slightly.

o.O.o

Princess Elodie visited a lot.

She came with Elliot some days. Others on her own.

She sometimes groomed. She sometimes trained. She sometimes simply observed.

What was always constant, however, was her greeting him.

“Hello, Topaz,” she said, a small smile on her face. The smell of misery still lingered on her, though it always lessened with each new day she’d visit. He wondered when the smell would be completely gone from her. “Would you like to go for a walk today? Father said I could take you out to see the gardens. Or maybe you’d like to see the inside of the castle? You’ve never been there, right?”

He hadn’t. None of the dogs had been, at least the ones he knew.

None of them had been given walks by Princess Elodie either, as far as he knew.

It was odd. He wondered why she paid so much attention to him. He wasn’t anything special.

He was just another hunting dog, after all.

o.O.o

When they had neared the castle, the smell of misery intensified ever so slightly.

Topaz refused to enter. He would not budge.

In the end, they walked in the gardens.

o.O.o

“What’s this?” Princess Elodie asked, picking the object placed nearby her feet. Topaz sat back, waiting for her reaction. “It’s a… rock? A very pretty rock.” She looked amused by it, examining its shiny surface. After turning it over once more in her hand, she looked at Topaz and asked, “Is this a present for me?”

Yes, he said and was sure she’d understand him.

She looked at the rock once more. After a moment, she smiled.

“Thank you.”

The smell of misery lightened yet again.

Author's Notes:
I’ve only played the demo of LLTQ, so there’s bound to be some errors about the game in here. My apologies! Also, I know that Princess Elodie eventually choose to raise a young puppy instead of choosing an already trained dog, but hey! This fanfic I wrote doesn’t say anything about her choosing to keep Topaz as her own personal dog, so, if you want, you can assume that she eventually decides to stop visiting him and choses to raise/train the new young puppy instead! That’s kinda sad for Topaz, but hey, he’s an OC anyway and it works for canon.

spikedlorelei

Re: Christmas Contest - All the Presence! (I mean, Presents!

#18 by spikedlorelei - Dec 21 2013

Ebony and Ivory


Princess Elodie of Nova, long roseate curls bouncing as she ran, slipped into her bedchamber to pull out a few splinters from her hand after a session of polearms training (halberds were brutal!) before meeting her Court Manners tutor. She was sighing over the state of her skin (so un-royal! What would her Demeanor tutor say!), when she noticed a small gift box on her bed, black-on-black embossed paper with a glossy black ribbon, and an ivory vellum envelope tucked in. Why was this in her room? It wasn't her birthday for another month.

The gift looked elegant, yet somehow a little menacing. Part of her wanted throw the box out of the window and walk away. But that was ridiculous. Maybe she was spending too much time in classes like Divination and Lore. She held the box in her hand. It was surprisingly heavy for its size. She ran her fingers over its richly textured surface.

She decided to open the envelope first.


Princess Elodie,

Queen Fidelia gave this into my keeping, many years ago. Perhaps some day I shall tell you the tale. I think Fidelia intended that I should give this to my bride, or sell it, but I kept it in remembrance of that day.

As you know, I have keenly missed my own mother after her passing. I'm sure you will feel less lonely if you have another piece of her life. Please accept this token of my esteem for you, and wear it with pride.

With Loving Regards,
Banion



Something from her mother? Elodie reached out a slim, soft hand to pull open the ribbon and lift open the box's lid. Inside, lay a gleaming, finely-wrought hair ornament encrusted with black and white diamonds, and a single, stunning green pearl. The exquisite comb almost seemed to have a glow about it. It would have suited her striking, regal mother very well. She feared it would look silly on her. She was so terrible at her studies, naïve and clueless. Always too slow, too far behind. She felt like she would never figure out where her mother's crystal was, let alone more about the mysteries of Lumen. She would never be a good Queen, like her beautiful mother.

Still, she was happy to have another piece of who Fidelia was. She really wanted to hear that story from Banion. For a moment, she could almost see her mother getting ready at her mirror, putting something like this in her hair before heading to Court, hand resting on her husband's arm.

As she daydreamed about her mother when she was still with her, she slowly played with her hair in front of her own mirror. Slowly she gathered her hair into an updo, placing the ornamental comb into it to hold the style. She smiled, imagined herself all grown up, perhaps getting ready for a ball. Queen Elodie, presiding over her peaceful kingdom with wisdom and grace.

Suddenly she felt a sharp pain in her head, like a sudden migraine coming on. Then a wave of dizziness. She needed to lie down for a moment. She went back to her bed, brushing the gift box aside. Another small note fluttered out of the bottom that she had not noticed earlier.

You would have been a formidable queen one day.

The letters blurred, and Elodie fell and knew no more.


_____*_____*_____

Note: I've also only played the demo. Smile

Ohana

Re: Christmas Contest - All the Presence! (I mean, Presents!

#19 by Ohana - Dec 21 2013

A silly submission, full of the horrors of nobility, politics, and being a 14-year-old girl! (Edited for length...first version was just a bit over the word count limit)

I probably do not have to say this, but there are some spoilers in here that reference several events you may come across in the game, so if you have not played or have only made it through the demo, you have been warned!



The Strange Delivery



As I finish up studying for the week, Alice knocks on my door. I bade her to enter.

"My lady, there is a letter for you. I am afraid the sender is unknown, but it at least does not bear the marks of foreign customs. Should I dispose of it?"

"Hmm...I do not see any danger in examining it. That will be all."

Alice bows, then carefully leaves the room without ever turning her back to me. Once the door is shut, I sigh with relief. Being Crown Princess takes its toll on me, and I cannot afford to let my image slacken for a moment around others, lest my kingdom be swept out from under me by an ambitious Duke or Duchess!

Free from distractions, I focus my attentions back onto the letter. Having dutifully studied poisons and magic, I pry the letter open slowly using a dagger, with a paperweight holding it in place. With it open, I focuses my senses on my Lumen crystal, and then direct them to the open envelope, but there is no trace of magic within. I manage to slide the letter out of its sleeve with the sharp tip of the dagger, then drip a solution I keep in my desk onto a few spots of the paper to make sure it had not been laced with poison. Satisfied that the viscous fluid had not turned from its innocuous shade of blue to a tellingly sinister shade of red, I proceeded to unfold the letter by hand.

What I saw inside was utterly embarrassing!

On the paper was a drawn depiction of me in an unfortunate state of undress, with giant tentacles wrapped all around me! I got a disgusted feeling as I imagined all the icky slimy stuff touching me. I almost giggle at the ridiculousness of it all, but then I remembered something important. If I let this slide, my carefully preserved Queenly image could be ruined! I must find out who sent this atrocity and make them rue the day they had creepy fantasies about me!

A sudden gust of wind rushed in through the open window and swept the dirty picture out the window.

"Oh no!" I stiffed a shriek of panic.

"I absolutely cannot let anyone see that! I will be ruined!" I thought, as I crawled out the window onto the roof, still slick from a fresh rain.

As I try to climb across the roof, scouting out the area in the direction the wind had been blowing, I lose my footing and start to fall. The distance of the drop turned out to be a blessing, though, as it gave me time to call forth my Lumen powers and fly off in the direction the letter had headed! Now in my fully distinctive magical attire, I hoped nobody would spot me leaving the castle grounds and come investigate.

It was at this point that I noticed something. There were traces of magic in the direction I was flying! It seemed to be moving at the same pace as the letter.

"The wind!" I realized.

Someone must have created this wind to draw me out. I had not noticed the very delicate traces of magic in the wind earlier, but now I could clearly feel them directing the drawing, and by extension, myself, to the coast! As the letter slowed to a halt, I carefully checked my surroundings, but saw nothing. Even in full paranoid mode, I had to try to retrieve that letter! I took a couple of careful steps toward the sheet of paper sticking upright out of the beach sand, when suddenly a small earthquake hit! Something hit me in the head in the confusion and I went unconscious.

"Ugh..." I moaned as my blurry vision slowly focused onto a cloaked person standing several feet below me.

Below me...and I cannot move my arms or legs! The smooth sticky sensation feels gross on my bound limbs and the smell is indescribable. Remembering what was in the drawing, I made sure I was still dressed...yes! My maidenhood has survived so far! But my celebration was cut short by the realization that it may not make much difference if I am killed instead! All those precautions and whoever this is still managed to find a weakness!

"You sick pervert! Are you the one that sent me that letter?" I raved as I tried to squirm my way out of the grip of my captor, whatever it was.

"What? You think I actually enjoyed making that atrociously tacky drawing?" a surprisingly feminine voice responded. "I just needed a way to draw you out, little princess. You see, I am now a member of the Occult of the Krakken, and I have come to sacrifice your life in exchange for this unstoppable war machine! You humiliated me, forced me to marry a disgusting Ixionite Duke, and discarded me to live as a peace offering! But all that changes today, when I end your life and take Nova for my own!"

"Wait...Lady Brin!?" I said, in bewilderment.

"You are just now figuring that out?" she replied in a conceited tone.

"You started that war! Am I supposed to sacrifice the lives of my people or empty the royal coffers just to protect your pride?" I fumed.

"Yes! I am a noble! Commoner trash are born to be sacrificed for us! Pride is worth a thousand soldiers. You should know that, with how you have carried yourself since arriving back at the palace."

I consider everything I've learned so far. I was sent that awful drawing. Magic had been used to draw me here, which means Lumens, but Brin seems to be the only one here. This revenge is personal, so she should be alone.

Her plan...I can use it! It is a gamble, but I am willing to bet that Brin has obtained the powers of a Lumen herself in order to get her revenge. I close my eyes and focus all of the power I can manage into a brilliant flare just above the beast that captured me. The heat burns at my skin but it also forces the monstrosity to let go of me!

I catch my breath as the flare dies down, then open my eyes. Brin is down on her hands and knees, sand clinging to her robes. Exhausted of magical energy from my escape, I manage to knock her out with a sleeping draught.

Dragging her body to the beach, I start to have second thoughts. Maybe I do not want a giant tentacle monster at my beck and call! It was creepy enough when it captured me! But Brin was going to be a problem for me if I let her go this time...and nobody is going to be looking for her inside an ancient monstrosity!

I ultimately decided to sacrifice her, dragging her body out to the beach and jumping away before it could get me as well, but I decided to seal the creature instead.

"Nova's history is weird enough without me recruiting this thing!"

Relieved, I sneaked back into the castle unnoticed.

The next morning, I hear a rapping at my door. I crawl out of bed, dress myself properly, brush my hair, and proceed to answer the door in a fully presentable state. On the other side stood Alice.

"Your father has requested an audience, My Lady." she said in a solemn tone.

I wonder if he found out that I went out last night? I head to his room.

"Princess Elodie, there has been an incident in one of the fishing villages." he tells me, before I can even finish closing the door. His tone of urgency worries me.

"What kind of incident? Do we need to send soldiers?" I ask, shifting into tactical mode.

He looks uncomfortable.

"No, that would probably make it worse. Actually it seems one of the fishermen pulled out a parchment from the water and has been showing it around the villages. It seems to have a rather unladylike semblance of...your Highness."

I blush ear-to-ear. I completely forgot about the drawing in the aftermath! I try to collect myself and then silently leave the room with my father still standing there waiting for my response. I half jog to my room whenever the corridors are empty. Finally arriving there, I kick out the servants that are making my bed and lock the door. I dive face-first into the pillows of my bed and just start screaming from the top of my lungs, the cries muffled to almost nothing.

"Great, not only is my image ruined, now only a weirdo will marry me!" I anguished, considering the dim future awaiting me. I now almost wish those poisoned chocolates had claimed me!

Miakoda

Re: Christmas Contest - All the Presence! (I mean, Presents!

#20 by Miakoda - Dec 22 2013

There's a lot of great entries here. However, hope my proves entertaining to some of you. There are some spoilers, especially with regard to the Alice ending. It is a big long (close to 1300 words).

Queen of Misrule

Elodie smiled, nodding at the occasional well-wisher as she made her way through the throng gathered on this Solstice Night. It was a long three years since her coronation, but the events leading up to that point had instilled a confidence few others in the realm had.

Still, it is nice to take a break every now and then, she thought.

Elodie paused, as she saw her father, Joslyn, and his wife, Sirin, Countess of Miranda and Callisto, talking with the other courtiers. Elodie took a deep breath, quelling the uneasiness in the pit of her stomach as technically Sirin was not just a contemporary, but her step-mother. However, even Elodie admitted her father was in better spirits than she had ever seen.

“Good evening father, good evening duchess,” Elodie said, acknowledging Sirin’s higher status as she approached the two.

“Elodie!” Joslyn said with great affection, wrapping his arms around his daughter.

Sirin curtsied, and in an unsure tone said, “Your majesty.”

Elodie felt a sharp breath catch in her throat, and then replied, “Please, when we are not in a formal setting, say, a Solstice gathering, call me Elodie.”

Sirin shook her head, “That would not be appropriate your majes—“

Elodie’s mouth frowned, her foot tapping the floor as she said, “What did I say? Or do I need to make it a royal command?”

Sirin’s cheeks reddened, and the duchess said, “As you say your majes…as you say Elodie.”

Elodie’s smile returned, and she looped her arm through Sirin’s as she said, “May I borrow Sirin for a few minutes father?”

Joslyn cocked his head at his daughter, “What are you up to now?”

About that time, the court musician led the band in a new tune, “My…normal…dance partner is missing, and I do so love this tune.”

Joslyn shook his head, “Very well, but be gentle with her.”

With short chuckle, Elodie led Sirin onto the ballroom floor, leading her through the Sudbury Gavotte.

“You know, if you thought you were going to shock the other nobles, this is a little tame, even by your standards,” Sirin whispered.

Elodie gently dipped Sirin, “Actually, I hope I’m the first to congratulate you.”

Sirin twirled under Elodie’s hand, “Congratulate me?”

Sirin’s movement slowed, stumbling slightly, as she wondered just what Elodie planned.

Elodie smiled, her hand moving down to Sirin’s abdomen, and a small reddish light enveloped the region.

“You’re going to be a mother,” Elodie said.

Sirin stopped, jostling another couple in the process, “A mother?”

Elodie pulled Sirin in close, rubbing her cheek against the other woman’s, giving a momentary appearance of intimacy for any who looked, and whispered in the other’s ear, “Though I must insist you and father visit more often. How else are you going to know your grandchildren better.”

Sirin’s glanced down at Elodie’s midriff, “Are you certain? After all, given your…preferences…”

Elodie sighed, as she led Sirin through another twirl, “I know my duty for the throne. The matter is resolved. And no, you don’t know the father. No one will.”

Elodie bristled slightly, as she remembered the night not too long ago she made her way down to the dungeons, and selected the man who would father the next generation of Novan royalty. After a brief moment of passion, her knowledge of poisons made sure the man died quietly, while her magics ensured his shade would never speak of what transpired.

Sirin interrupted Elodie’s reminiscence with a simple question, “Grandchildren?”

Elodie bobbed slightly, “Twins. My magic can be much more useful than turning Shanjians into scrimshaw.”

The music started to die, and Elodie added, “Thank you for the dance. But there is one more matter I must attend to.”

Elodie strode to the center of the ballroom, and all assembled quieted as they awaited the words of their queen.

“Welcome everyone to this Solstice. Let us all reflect on the blessings the Good Lady, as the passing of one year presages the start of another,” Elodie said reverently, and through the stained glass she could see the sun was about to set.

“And it is with a clear heart that I have one last proclamation,” Elodie continued, her eyes glancing towards the entrance of the ballroom.

Two trumpeters on each side raised their horn, and blew a welcoming blast as both doors swung open. A young woman strode in, garbed in a black dress with silver trim. Fine filigree wire adorned her long, brown hair, while a pair of glasses couldn’t hide her fear at the assembled nobility. The woman held a box, a lavender bow on it.

“Step forward Alice Kincaid,” Elodie commanded in a clear voice.

Hesitantly, Alice strode forward, the crowd having parted way to allow her passage. Her footsteps echoed through the ballroom as she approached her queen. When the maid drew closer, Elodie beckoned for the woman to kneel.

“Let it be known,” Elodie continued, “that as the Good Lady brings on the winter, the court ennobles Alice Kincaid. Come the morrow, you shall no longer be Alice; instead, you shall be Lady Alice, Baroness of Thalia.”

Elodie placed a hand on Alice’s shoulder, helping the young woman up, “But for this eve, you are still Alice Kincaid; and the Queen of Misrule.”

And with a great flourish, Elodie removed her crown and placed it on Alice’s head. The crown drooped at a slight angle, as Elodie dropped to a knee herself.

There was a slight apprehension in the room since by tradition, only a commoner could don the role, and ruled as a royalty until the dawn of the next day. There were too many instances when a noble didn’t leave to see the dawn, slain by the rule of the Misrule Queen.

“What would you have of me, your majesty,” Elodie said demurely.

Alice looked around at the gathered nobility, clutching her box tightly, as she said, “Two matters, your maje…”

“Elodie,” interrupted the pink-haired woman, reminding Alice that by tradition the Queen of Misrule was the monarch.

“Two matters,” Alice repeated, fidgeting slightly, “One is a question for your maj…for you, Elodie. The other is a gift.”

A relieved sigh echoed through the ballroom as the nobility knew they would live to see another dawn. Then attention turned back to the kneeling monarch, and the chosen Queen of Misrule.

Elodie asked, “What would you ask of me, your majesty?”

Alice took a deep breath, touched the silver collar around her neck, and said in a voice steady from practice, “Will you grant me your hand in marriage?”

Elodie’s lips quirked, glad the days of practice, building up Alice’s confidence paid off. A single laugh rebounded in the room, and Elodie’s smile deepened as she recognized her father’s voice.

“Gladly, your majesty,” Elodie said in a pleased tone. Then she glanced at the box, for that was the one thing not covered in her rehearsal.

Silence filled the room once more, and there were a couple hesitant coughs when Elodie said, “And the other matter your majesty?”

Alice’s face flushed red, but she handed the box to Elodie. Alice whispered, “I tried to leave this in your room, but the guards refused entry.”

Elodie smiled, “That was by my orders. I didn’t want you to back out now, did I?”

With a swift motion, Elodie’s hands quickly tore the wrapping from the gift. Alice winced, as she impotently tried to stop Elodie, “Wait. Don’t open that yet…”

Alice quieted as Elodie held a black, oiled riding crop in her hand. Elodie ran an appreciative finger down the handle, and cooed, “Aren’t you the sweetest thing?”

Elodie whispered, “I can show my…appreciation…later, your majesty. But for now, would you care to dance?”

TheBoyd

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#21 by TheBoyd - Dec 22 2013

Hey Hanako, been awhile.

Cutting it kind of close. Oh well, I had fun regardless.
Kind of out of my element, by the time I noticed the contest I was far from my tablet, but that's okay.



And here are some sketches to boot. http://theboyd.deviantart.com/art/Elodie-Sketches-421352759

Bombermans

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#22 by Bombermans - Dec 22 2013

Well, I had to write it first in Spanish and then translate it with some friends, but... here it is, my entry for the contest. I really hope there aren't much grammatical mistakes and such... And I surely hope it's not 'retarded english' like I predicted earlier! Laughing

A different birthday

“Elodie! Elodie?! For God's sake... where's she now?”

The shouts and footsteps of the marquis teacher of Decorum & Elegance classes resounded all over the galleries and corridors of the castle. I even heard him from my chamber. Any other person would have first looked for me there, but marquis D'Sinch... was not precisely your average person. He was a good person, though. A bit eccentric, with those curlers on his spotless white wig, and those pink tights he wore but... he really was a nice guy. It wasn’t his fault that I skipped his lessons. It was because I wasn’t in the mood. Yes, I know it wouldn't be the first time where I attended class without listening to the teacher, but this time it was really different. This time was my mother's first birthday... ever since her death.

Formerly, bells and trumpets would announce the big celebration of this event throughout the entire city. Commoners would have been invited to the exteriors of the royal castle, where a big fair would take place and a big feast would be given for all of those who could afford a seat. Large quantities of minstrels, merchants and comedians would assemble and open all kinds of stands. There would have been shops filled with chocolate, performances of music and poetry, jousts and archery competitions. Each year I would give my mother a hand-made gift. Nothing too complicated, for sure, since I insisted on doing it all by myself, with no help at all. The very first gift I made was a scarf. Well… I TRIED to make a scarf. I was too young and didn't know how to either sew nor knit. But somehow I managed to get some clothing cutting out a curtain, glue them together and gave them the shape of a scarf. When father saw what I done, he scolded me first, but he later praised me. “A gift done by yourself will always be more valuable than any treasure you may find”, he said.

Every year my mother would make me wear my hair loose, put my on a hood and take me secretly with her through the fair, so that I could play and get to know the commoners first hand. But this year... not only there wouldn’t be any fairs… but also my mother would no longer accompany me. How could I attend classes like this?

I yank opened the door and left my bedroom half-resigned half-upset. Then I saw D'Sinch arriving through the hall.

“Princess Elodie! Finally I found you! Have you perchance forgotten that...?”

“I appreciate the reminder, marquis, but your services will not be needed today.” I told him politely, with a tone so full of sternness and determination that even I got impressed.

“Oh. Sure. I get it” he said, though it was clear that he didn’t quite well understand a thing. “Is it because our last classes? Oh, Elodie, if my suggestion of the tutu for the dance classes disturbed you, you only have to tell me and...”

“No, no!” I answered, laughing. “I assure you it has nothing to do with you.”

“Ah, ok! That's a different problem! If it’s your will, then there will be no lessons for you today. Remember: you are the mistress. I'm just a modest teacher!”

And after that, D'Sinch left happily via the same way where he came. I could even hear him whistling. Much more serene now, I relaxed my shoulders and sighed, getting ready to hear the mocking remarks of the captain of the guard, my personal bodyguard Leon Luminière, the Knight of the Black Suit.

“Wow, Elodie. Such an insolent way to avoid your lessons. Do you really know everything that’s there to know about decorum and elegance? Have you learnt to behave with the perfect modesty and dignity of a true princess? Learnt how to move with the gracefulness of a swan? Because I would rather say that your movements resemble much more like a duck...”

“Humph. At least I know more about gallantry than you, my loyal knight.” I answered him, giving him back the taunt in a friendly way. Luminière loved sarcasm, and I loved his frankness, so… eventually we became engaged in a healthy 'snide competition'. We were good friends, but I would have never guessed the gift he would offer me that day.

Later, he would tell me that everything was Julianna’s of Ursul idea. She was my mother's guardian, she knew her quite well. She was also a good friend of my knight, to whom a long time ago she gave a deep black saxophone as a token of their friendship. The two of them had been as two peas in a pod since they were kids, and that became an unbreakable relationship of friendship when they reached adulthood. Even nowadays Luminière still carried that saxophone everywhere. My mother told Julianna how much her birthday meant for the both of us. How much we enjoyed each other.

So Julianna organized, without me noticing it, a little celebration for today... and Luminière had accepted, reluctantly, to be the one responsible of making me leave the castle without spilling the beans.

“It's almost Winter. You can't get out of the castle that way.” he said, entering my chambers (without asking me for permission, by the way), taking one of the coats that were hanging and putting it on my hands.

“Here, put this on.” he said. I looked at him incredulous, waiting for an explanation, but he simply insisted “Come on, quickly!”

Without even giving me the time to analyze the situation, he began to walk away through the hall, striding, so I had to put on the coat while running to catch him.

“What's going on? Where are we going?” I asked him.

“Outside the castle”

“What? Why?”

“A powerful seer has requested an audience with you. Alone”

He took me as fast as possible through the halls, grabbing my shoulders and pushing me to follow his route, which by the way was not the shortest one to exit the castle. Outside, we saw a little stand in which a mysterious hooded figure was seated, with a crystal ball in front of him.

“Princess Elodie... I've come to foresee you a brilliant future...”

That voice... where had I heard that voice before?

“I see you... as a famous model of renowned artists. Fabulous hairstyles, excellent dresses and astonishing discoveries await you if you attend marquis D'Sinch's lessons...”

Seated opposite of the seer I tried to lower my head to look him in the face, but when I did that, he bent his head backwards. When I bent to a side, he did the same to the other side. This went on until I tricked him and raised his hood. I doubt there's any need to say who was hiding under the hood.

“Oh my gosh, Princess! You have found me out!”

Luminière brought his hand to his face. I just simply kept looking at D'Sinch. The expression of my face surely was intimidating, since D'Sinch bolted quickly out of the stage with a guilty smile on his face. I looked at Luminière, who tilted his head. He pushed down the hood of my coat, took me by my arm and started to walk away from the castle.

“Aw aw aw! What's the matter now?”

“It's over! I'm sick of playing dumb. We're going to visit your mother right now”.

“What? Why?”

“You conceal it quite well, Elodie, but it's fairly obvious that you're depressed over this whole thing of your mother’s birthday. And we're going to fix that right now”.

“How... how do you know that?”

He didn't answer. He just pulled my arm and took me again into the castle. My mother’s tomb had come to be marvelous, full of flowers and clothings, giving it the appearance of a true grave for a queen. There we found Julianna, D'Sinch… and even the musician. So this was what they all had been plotting?

“Guys... I had no idea. It's so beautiful...” I turned to Luminière, who had his arms crossed, and he pointed to the front. I hadn’t seen him before, but father was also there. He took me by my hand and we walked together towards the grave. He was holding on his clenched hand a Lumen crystal.

“Elodie, there's still one detail missing… your gift”.

“Happy birthday... mom” I took the new scarf I made and put it over the tomb with care. For a moment it seemed to be that my mother's silhouette was at my side, with a maternal expression on her face. No, I'm really sure I saw her.

“We couldn't offer you a festival, but... I thought we could at least give you a last farewell” explained my father.

“It’s ok…” I answered, drying my tears. “As you always said... the best gifts are those made by hand... from the bottom of your heart.”

yutaroh

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#23 by yutaroh - Dec 22 2013

Hi, everybody! Recently, I have discovered Hanako Games thanks to Magical Diary on Steam. I tried the demos of Fatal Hearts, Date Warp and Long Live the Queen and I have loved them, so I was thinking to purchase them all. By chance, I have seen this contest and I have decided to try luck. Here is my modest contribution. The most important thing here is to take part at this event and to have fun. I hope you all enjoy this as I did and I wish you all good luck Surprised Happy Holidays, everybody Laughing

This Christmas time, Elodie received a maid dress. Who did send it? It was a joke or a mischieveous suitor? Anyway, she tried on and she is discovered! They ask her to do some works, like washing the dishes... but she loose her control and she fell under the plates Crying or Very sad


Mad_Scientist

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#24 by Mad_Scientist - Dec 23 2013

Some nice entries here, though personally I kind of wish there had been more art submissions. (And I know I didn't do art... but believe me, in my case you should be glad for that. Very Happy )

Good luck everyone, and thanks for running the contest Hanako!

hanako

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#25 by hanako - Dec 23 2013

Entries closed! The secret panel of illuminati will now begin their deliberations.

hanako

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#26 by hanako - Dec 24 2013

Secret deliberations have been held, dice and magic 8-balls have been consulted.

For this competition, we are choosing three winners. Two different judges have each made one selection, and then the Random Number Generator has picked a third. Which is which remains a secret!


Therefore, in no particular order, our winners are:

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phoenixgirl
Mad_Scientist
and
Miakoda!

There really were a lot of great entries in this, so for everyone else, you can be the first to know that all Hanako Games titles are now 50% off until New Years!

(That means all my titles - games like The Royal Trap, Fatal Hearts, etc. It does not include games like Lucky Rabbit Reflex or things in the 'Other Games' section, because I don't control the prices on those.)

No code necessary, the price should be automatically discounted in the shopping cart.

Happy Holidays!

yutaroh

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#27 by yutaroh - Dec 24 2013

Congratulations to all winners Laughing There were many good entries Mr. Green Also, it's so nice to read about the Xmas sales, so... everybody wins!! Razz Razz

Miakoda

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#28 by Miakoda - Dec 24 2013

Thank you!

There was some really tough competition. I was just happy to participate ^_^

phoenixgirl

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#29 by phoenixgirl - Dec 24 2013

Woot! I'm so excited and there were a lot of great entries. Very Happy
Please help and support me here.

The Fighting Doll

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#30 by The Fighting Doll - Dec 24 2013

Congratulations to all! Sparks (by CthulhuLemon) is my favorite entry.
Many thanks for the sale!

Mad_Scientist

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#31 by Mad_Scientist - Dec 24 2013

Congrats phoenixgirl and Miakoda!


Thanks again for doing the contest, Hanako, and also for the sale. And for making the games in the first place. Very Happy And it's a day early, but Merry Christmas everyone!

Ohana

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#32 by Ohana - Dec 24 2013

I don't normally do fanfic, but it was fun to write and LLTQ makes for a pretty amusing basis because of all of the possibilities (even though not all of the characters get developed as much as I might like). Congrats to the winners!

Miakoda

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#33 by Miakoda - Dec 25 2013

Mad_Scientist:

Congrats phoenixgirl and Miakoda!


Thanks again for doing the contest, Hanako, and also for the sale. And for making the games in the first place. Very Happy And it's a day early, but Merry Christmas everyone!

Thank you Mad Scientist. And congratulations to you and phoenixgirl as well.

And thanks to Ohana and yutaroh for the congratulations as well.

And thanks to Hanako for making such a great game.

The various views of Elodie was very much fun to read, and I can certainly see how that would come about Smile

CthulhuLemon

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#34 by CthulhuLemon - Dec 25 2013

Congrats to our winners and thanks to all the entrants (as well as Hanako for running the contest!). The stories had great variety and it was a lovely chance to see different perspectives on Elodie and her world. Happy holidays, all!

(Also, The Fighting Doll - thank-you, that's very kind of you to say!)

ark99k

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#35 by ark99k - Dec 26 2013

Congratulations Mad scientist, phoenixgirl and Miakoda! I liked reading the fanfics and enjoyed entering the contest! Thank you Hanako!
★Shining like a star!★

Bombermans

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#36 by Bombermans - Jan 31 2014

It's a bit late, but I saw that I forgot to congratulate the winners. LOL. >_<U

So... its better now than never! So congratulations, phoenixgirl, Mad_Scientist and Miakoda! It has been a really funny contest, and there where so many good entries. ^^ Lets hope we'll see another contest like this another day! Mr. Green
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