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One Step Forward, Ten Steps Back - Magical Diary Fanfiction

#1 by kitfoxpup - May 18 2013

All right, so I'm used to functioning on Fanfiction.net, but I haven't posted this there yet. Don't ask me why. Just don't.

This document is LITERALLY called "Title" on my flash drive, and before posting is here I came up with that posted in the thread title.

Right, SO, I used to moderate another forum that was WAY stricter than things seem here (funny stories that can totally be iterated if readers so wish), so I'm assuming double posting is all right if it's within reason (i.e posting a new chapter and not just bumping). I was going to go post in other sections before I posted here for "training", but then I realized how silly that sounded. Post before you post? What? Forum post training?

At any rate, here you go. It isn't finished, and I don't know if it will be. I have a bad habit of never finishing things. -tries to ignore Kingdom Hearts fanfiction screaming for attention-

Summary: On her thirteenth birthday, Kitiara Kix finds out that she's eligible to attend Iris Academy's school for the Magically Gifted. With her health down at the failing end, she eagerly accepts the mysterious Choice, dreaming of a day where she will no longer be broken. Through this decision, she takes One Step Forward. T for Language, mostly. Genre includes Humor, Romance, Angst, Drama, Mystery, and Action.

Link for story:

ONE STEP FORWARD, TEN STEPS BACK link

Uodate

#2 by kitfoxpup - May 22 2013

Two chapters have been added to the story, and technically 11 more have been written. Reviews appreciated.

Also, I should point out that while I'm staying pretty true to the calendar of MD I'm going to be omitting certain events and making up my own. Damien is going to be slightly crazier. Just saying. Also some tweeks will be so minute that they will seem more like mistakes, but trust me. There's a reason for everything except my grammar fails.

It is supposed to be a Grabiner fic, btw. I noticed he seems to the most popular yet controversial. I intend to stay true to his character, so he won't be a totally creepy, lecherous old man lawl.

#3 by Ladygothika87 - Jun 5 2013

I just wanted to tell you that I enjoy your story very much and I hope you continue writing it. I love the way you portray Grabiner as well.