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#1 by thezooqueen - Sep 7 2012
This is my first attempt at a FanFic. Please take care of me. This is chapter 1. Chapter 2 is in 2nd round of editing and chapter 3 is in the process of being written.#2 by anastasia.stephenson - Sep 8 2012
That was amazing! I can't wait till the second chapter is done. : D#3 by thezooqueen - Sep 8 2012
hehe thanks. I have 2 and 3 complete. I am just waiting on 3 to be edited. I plan on posting 2 and 3 together because 2 might leave some people going uh this doesn't make sense.
#4 by thezooqueen - Sep 11 2012
Here is chapter 2#5 by cae - Sep 11 2012
Very nice. Going to be a stickler and tell you there's a typo where you meant to write "shower" in Chapter 1. Of course, it didn't impede the reading so I guess you can just leave it alone.#6 by thezooqueen - Sep 12 2012
Thanks. It is fixed now.#7 by cae - Sep 12 2012
Haha, it wasn't a huge thing. It's one of those kinds of typos that just gets ignored by autocorrections. Not like it stopped me, I was like "Huh? Oh wait, duh. She's in the bathroom" and kept reading lol#8 by thezooqueen - Sep 12 2012
hehe yes I understand My grammar and spelling is horrible. The darling angle on this site that is editing my story for me must be half insane by now.#9 by anastasia.stephenson - Sep 13 2012
Oh goodness i love your story!! I need more now!! Lol#10 by thezooqueen - Sep 13 2012
hehe Thank you! I am just waiting on ch3 to be edited. Then after I make updates. I will post it.#11 by cae - Sep 17 2012
moar now plx D:<#12 by thezooqueen - Sep 17 2012
I really want to but my editor has not finished it yet. She is also working on her story. I could go ahead and post it but there will bee all sorts of errors and revisions needed. My grammar sucks LoL#13 by anastasia.stephenson - Sep 18 2012
Mental editing. Ill do it if it means more of your awesome story#14 by thezooqueen - Sep 18 2012
mental editing??#15 by cae - Sep 18 2012
Read it, and edit it in your own head as you read? Hehe. I don't know, I guessed!#16 by thezooqueen - Sep 18 2012
eeeekkk you would spend more time mentally correcting it than enjoying the story LoL#17 by cae - Sep 18 2012
Hahaha, who knows! LOL#18 by thezooqueen - Sep 18 2012
I will email her *my editor* today if she is still to busy then I will go ahead and post it. Unless any of you guys/gals like to edit??#19 by anastasia.stephenson - Sep 19 2012
I cant wait!!#20 by thezooqueen - Sep 20 2012
Here chapter 3 is! I hope you enjoy!#21 by anastasia.stephenson - Sep 20 2012
THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING!!!!#22 by thezooqueen - Sep 21 2012
Really??? Thanks *blush*#23 by cae - Sep 23 2012
Nice!
#24 by thezooqueen - Sep 23 2012
Thank you My daughter helped me pick out the name of the bay #25 by anastasia.stephenson - Sep 24 2012
Awww. Thats adorable. How old is your daughter?#26 by thezooqueen - Sep 24 2012
hehe 15 but she thinks she is like 30#27 by cae - Sep 25 2012
I was like that when I was here age (I'm 24 now), particularly with my Mom. I didn't grow out of it until I was about 21 or 22... Haha, but now I can appreciate all the things I learned from experience instead of listening to my Mom. ;P#28 by thezooqueen - Sep 25 2012
I have to stop playing games long enough to write it LoL#29 by anastasia.stephenson - Sep 26 2012
oh lol. I'm only like a year older than your daughter then and I act almost like that. :3 Then again ninety percent of the time I'm with my two besties and I act like I'm bloody fuckin nuts or deranged so I guess it balances out the other ten percent lol. oh I showed your story to one of my besties and it inspired her to write a Grabby fanfic too! I didn't realize she was a fellow Grabby lover till then but hey. lol#30 by thezooqueen - Oct 3 2012
My computer has been on the fritz. I will start chapter 4 shortly sorry for the wait#31 by thezooqueen - Oct 10 2012
Having problems right now am on hiatus. Will continue when I can. I apologize.