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Obliquely Run (Grabiner/Sue story)


marithlizard

Obliquely Run (Grabiner/Sue story)

#1 by marithlizard - May 23 2012

All right, thanks to Kira A's inspiring example, I've got up the nerve to post a first chapter:

http://archiveofourown.org/works/410991

This one may arguably be for mature audiences only in future chapters, so please don't quote anything inappropriate here or do anything you're not supposed to (and of course if asked I'll delete the link).

Ladygothika87

#2 by Ladygothika87 - May 23 2012

Eek!!! I really want to know what happens next! Very Happy you made me blush on the "options" she was given lol but it was so great. I'm glad you posted and really hope to read more soon!

AshleyBoo

#3 by AshleyBoo - May 23 2012

I like it Very Happy
Happy to see a mature story with Grabiner & Sue!
Think it's the first one i've read about them.
Those are some options for Sue Embarassed
Can't wait to see what happens next.

marithlizard

#4 by marithlizard - May 24 2012

Thanks for the kind comments! Chapter two up, same warnings:

http://archiveofourown.org/works/410991/chapters/683080

Kira_A

#5 by Kira_A - May 24 2012

Aw, you're too sweet Merith. I'm glad you are sharing your story.

Option Two it is, huh? You receive two out of five George Takei style "oh myyyyy"s, an arbitrary scale that I have just invented.

Makes me wonder if she will get kicked out of school if there is success, though...

Anyway, keep it up, I look forward to the next installment.

AshleyBoo

#6 by AshleyBoo - May 25 2012

marithlizard:

Thanks for the kind comments! Chapter two up, same warnings:

http://archiveofourown.org/works/410991/chapters/683080
Seems to be going just well with her & Grabiner so far, judging by that grinning at the end of the chapter Very Happy
Letting her sleep in and leaving a note Smile he's being pretty nice, not romantic but you never know maybe as the story goes on lol

Can't wait for the next chapter!

marithlizard

#7 by marithlizard - May 29 2012

Chapter three is up! http://archiveofourown.org/works/410991/chapters/690022

Good lord these people talk a lot. They just sort of stole the keyboard and completely rewrote what I had planned. o.O

AshleyBoo

#8 by AshleyBoo - May 30 2012

marithlizard:

Chapter three is up! http://archiveofourown.org/works/410991/chapters/690022

Good lord these people talk a lot. They just sort of stole the keyboard and completely rewrote what I had planned. o.O
Too bad there's no one her age she can talk too, can't really blame Ellen & Virginia though lol
Seems like something is going on with good students using magic outside the school.
Liking the Ellen/Donald pairing hope they end up going out
Loving all the kisses Embarassed and her loving that he snores Smile

Kira_A

#9 by Kira_A - May 31 2012

I really fear but also hope that Ellen is going to get the two of them in huge trouble... With SCIENCE!

Looking forward to the next installment!

ElCantardelaLunaOscura

#10 by ElCantardelaLunaOscura - Jul 20 2012

Sooo...did it end there?
"Y a pesar de que no estás, te llevo cosida a mi piel.
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."

marithlizard

#11 by marithlizard - Jul 20 2012

ElCantardelaLunaOscura:

Sooo...did it end there?
Nope! I do apologize for the extended delay, caused by RL, lameness of author, and a surprise demand from the Professor for extra chapters from his viewpoint. Ch4 should be up sometime this weekend, and 5 is about half done.

ElCantardelaLunaOscura

#12 by ElCantardelaLunaOscura - Jul 20 2012

wuwuwuwuw!!! 'cause I loved that it contains "mature themes" it makes it unique
"Y a pesar de que no estás, te llevo cosida a mi piel.
Tu recuerdo se ha instalado en mi a vivir.
Y aunque nunca volverás, busco en el trastero de mi
ese beso abandonado que nunca te di."

Hopeless Romantic

#13 by Hopeless Romantic - Jul 28 2012

OooOo! Great story! So fluidly written. And I was totally blushing with my mouth all agape and ....stuff. Shocked Embarassed Very Happy

Anonymous

#14 by Anonymous - Aug 6 2012

Is there more to the story?

thezooqueen

#15 by thezooqueen - Aug 14 2012

OMG I was sooo enthralled! Please finish the story! Smile <3

Jenkouken

#16 by Jenkouken - Sep 4 2012

Very interesting!

I was like, why is he being so awful?! Evil or Very Mad
Then when his reasoning became clear, it really fit together.

That first night, just like someone mentioned above, I could practically hear George Takei's ohhhhhh myyyyyyyyyy Wasn't sure what he meant about latin pronunciation; very curious what she said inspiring that lol. A very Embarassed in a good way.

Very well written.
Distressing that she's in a position where she might be forced to have a baby though. Makes me feel really awful for her being forced into that.
Love the fluid style and personalities.

Grabiner/Sue fanfic authors unite ^_~
I hope you continue.

~Esmeh
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