Re: Final update
#6 by hanako - Nov 9 2014
IIRC the main reason we left the 'makes your father happy' line alone is that the change wouldn't be particularly meaningful, since the activity already makes her depressed. It doesn't seem worth adding in another text string to confuse the translators with just to change the tense to 'would have' or the like.
I see your point on the Sirin conversation, that it doesn't necessarily flow as logically. Leading into the discussion of nobles and plots is pretty important for that event, though, and I'd rather have it slightly jar than have the player miss out on that information.
(But please do feel free to point these things out! I'm not always going to change them, but some things may change eventually, and I don't notice everything!)